I’m considering a little plot tweaking.
Right now, the storyline of The Clockwise Heart doesn’t resemble an arc so much as it does a drunk-off-its-ass giraffe passed out on the floor of a honky-tonk bar.
(Let that visual linger with you for a moment and wince with me, everyone.)
In other words, a big mountainous lump of action, followed by a long stretch of thin, finished off by a glassy eyed hump of overwrought emotion.
Yep, a little tweaking is definitely in order… before someone calls the ASPCA on my poorly-plotted butt.