So, I’ve decided to pluck out all the “clunky” details-of-place littering up Blue and condense them all down to an introductory few paragraphs after the Prologue.
As I’ve noted before, I am OCD-ing about getting this intro just right. However, I’m also feeling a little iffy about the overall idea of an intro.
It feels almost, well, pompous.
My weirdness gets really tiring, you know?
Until tomorrow…
Chloe
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Just try it and if it doesn’t work out the way you had planned in your head then leave it out. Good luck!
Thanks! I think that’s exactly what I’ll do.